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The Waffles are Doomed

Submitted by plognark on Fri, 08/28/2009 - 09:36
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The Waffles are Doomed

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I've been thinking...

Submitted by Dantheman82904 on Tue, 02/09/2010 - 17:13.

I like this pic a lot, and I've looked at it several times. I almost hate to be a critic, but I feel like this pic would be flawless without one minor thing. On the right of the picture, you have a drip of saliva coming down, and that does look really cool, but it's not differentiated from his tooth, which makes me sad :( If you could just draw that little line to mark the end of his tooth and separate his drool, it would make me very happy :) Other than my minor, unqualified criticism for that bit, I love it.

I see what you mean

Submitted by plognark on Thu, 02/11/2010 - 16:55.

Yeah, I could probably at least put some green behind there so you can see the outline of his mouth. That's sort of a black and white pen/ink illustrating technique that didn't translate well into color, now that you point it out.